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Submitted: December 6, 2012
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Who Needs Wings?{Critique Please}by =LaArka

Digital Art / Drawings & Paintings / Fantasy

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Obviously not EquinOxes...

Critique by ~RainbowCat312 Feb 16, 2013, 4:14:54 AM

It is so sad that there is blood
but what happend to him....
The backround makes it very smokey and creepy and cold , how this pegasus designed her fate?
and hes like sitting on a rock and looking down to fall
i do not know why he has blood all over him but it is still nice and this has a sad air to it ...
And these is like on mlp..
BUT it really needs more coloring and stuff
and i love how u did the shadow too
and the light seems to be wrong ,
and
I suggest to look at other artworks to find out how they work and what technique they use

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Critique by ~REDandYELLOWZ Jan 11, 2013, 9:38:54 PM

this has a sad air to it, how this pegasus has designed her fate.

The background gives it a cold, misty/smokey design, and I like how it
hasn't got a lot of blood on it, just enough to tell the action was recent,[so many pictures have too much blood and gore] as well as the hoof-prints and the discarded feathers.

Also, the color scheme is nice, enough to pass as a MLP, with a good touch of natural colors. and, although this theme has been used more than once, this angle gives it a new air of originality~
...
this art is great, and DEFINITELY deserves critique~
EEYUP.

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~espc13 May 8, 2013

Lilac Stone(pony OC):

~Westernciv Mar 23, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

I need wings... for dinner! *chomp chomp* Seriously though, this is great! I especially like the bloody paw prints. They give us a dark insight into this pony's tragic story. And I love tragic bloody pony stories :3

=LaArka Mar 24, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Me too! Thanks for the comment~ All feedback is good feedback!

~cbalk193 Mar 8, 2013 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Well, my computer doesn't let me write critiques, but that is my intention!

The basic set up the picture creates a disadvantage in that you cannot see the character's face, and therefore you are a little limited in how easily you can convey blatant emotion, but you have managed to completely pass over that obstacle and do a really good job in drawing this character's emotion through body language with the slumped shoulders, a downcast gaze shown through the tilt of the head and the pulled back ears. It almost helps the overall effect more that we cannot easily see this characters emotions and thoughts through the face, it is our job as the viewers to use our imagination and inference skills!